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DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-09-19 10:35 PM

She held my hand
as we walked
to the fair,
laughing,
with her head
held high
and nary
a care.
The cold
autumn morning,
overcast and storming,
couldn’t cause despair,
while
her heartwarming
smile
made every mile
fly
beneath my feet.
She
makes me complete
and whole
you know,
I guess
it’s true
that you reap
what you sow.

I can’t believe
she’ll be gone
in the morning.
will our
new-found love
die aborning?
Wonders abound
with the love
I’ve found.
Overwhelmed
by desire
that climbs
ever higher,
I soon found,
by love
I was bound
and had
no desire
to win myself free.
God
bless this life
and it’s majesty.

©1999 DreamEvil

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

caroline
Senior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm

1 posted 1999-09-19 10:39 PM

I'm smiling!!

Your happiness means much to me, you know! Keep the faith...it will not let you down.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Lucie
Senior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 1077
Houston

2 posted 1999-09-19 10:42 PM

I like this whimsical side of you.

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

3 posted 1999-09-19 10:42 PM

I too am glad for your happiness, Dream..it seems love is blossoming quite a bit here at passions..

Nice work.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

4 posted 1999-09-19 10:44 PM

Another stunning piece...You don't write duds, that's for sure!!

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

5 posted 1999-09-19 10:50 PM

This is VERY nice Dreamevil...I like this side of you :-)

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society

U K Hero
Member

since 1999-08-08

Posts 266
England

6 posted 1999-09-20 03:23 PM

What a refreshing piece keep this up and we’ll be calling dream’angel

beowulf_26
Member

since 1999-06-29

Posts 183

7 posted 1999-09-20 08:23 PM

Having read a fair number of you works I sit here in awe. Yes your word usage is great, the emotion is there, the poetry flows coherently. But what makes my jaw drop to the floor is the fact that you are so versatile. You seem to have full command over all forms and styles of poetry whether they be short concise lines or cycling poetry. My hat is off. I have much to learn.

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

8 posted 1999-09-20 09:52 PM

My wife and I are working things out for everyone's benefit. Thank you much for responding.

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

9 posted 1999-09-21 06:46 PM

Ohhhh that is sooo sweet!! I likes!!

I am happy for you!!!!

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Justbleu

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

10 posted 1999-09-21 06:49 PM

Shucks I don't know how I missed this one! To envision you floating off your feet, on love cloud #9. What a treat it is! Good poem too!

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