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PhaerieChild
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since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon

0 posted 1999-09-19 10:23 PM


I sit at my computer and find my way to Passions
It's my home page now and a "home" after a fashion.
I read all the poems from every single poet
I reply to some that really get me wouldn't ya know it.

Lately I've been reading the antics of Toerag and Andy Scott
Funny stuff they're postin' but let me tell you what.
The most intimate things are happening to Michael and Femme.
At first I thought "What is this and what's up with them?"

After a couple of posts I realized with delight
That Mike and Femme had found something one night.
They have a love for poetry and of that there is no doubt
But something had to be missing, something they couldn't do without.

I read some more the secrets of their love in this forum
I've watched it grow like a budding rose, a flower in blossom.
The poetry was always good, and now it's even better.
I think they should write a book and call it "Our Love Letters"

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Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild


© Copyright 1999 Shawna R. Holder - All Rights Reserved
The Keeper Of Keys
Junior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 39

1 posted 1999-09-19 10:25 PM


That was a great read, thanks. I love the quote on your sig. It's great!!!

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~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~

To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting.


PhaerieChild
Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon
2 posted 1999-09-19 10:27 PM


Thanx Keeper of the Keys. Your sig ain't too bad itself.

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Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild


Tara Simms
Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA
3 posted 1999-09-19 10:37 PM


I agree, WildChild. They should compile all their poems into a book! Wouldn't that be something? *sigh*

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Work like you don't need the money, love like it's never going to hurt, dance like nobody's watching.

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
4 posted 1999-09-19 10:38 PM


WildChild,
The feelings Femme and I have been able to share openly on this board have been nothing short of a delight in my life. She brings out some very tender emotions in me I knew not where there.
She definately brings out the best in my poetry. I cherish everthing she has written to me and indeed, maybe one day we'll get them all together (her poems & mine) in one book for all to see.
For now, allow me to thank you for letting something special between us be special to you also.

Michael


[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 09-19-99).]

PhaerieChild
Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon
5 posted 1999-09-19 10:38 PM


I think it would be the greatest love story ever written

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Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild


PhaerieChild
Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon
6 posted 1999-09-19 10:41 PM


Michael It is special to watch a bond form between two people that obviously have a great respect and dare I say love, for each other and I feel special for being allowed to witness something so wonderful

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Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild


Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

7 posted 1999-09-19 10:50 PM


This is so lovely - Femme - tell all!!!!
Julie
Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
8 posted 1999-09-19 10:51 PM


I think they should open their own forum,
a read only of course.

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Julie
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..."to thine own self be true."
>William Shakespeare



poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
9 posted 1999-09-19 10:55 PM


WildChild, let me say ( through teary eyes) that I am so honored you wrote this for us....I had no idea when I first pulled it up! How wonderful to see a poem about us, that speaks such magnitudes of my feelings not only for poetry, and Passions, but also for my Michael...We are truly blessed, having found utter inspiration when we both needed it so bad !! I hope you guys don't get tired of watching us ** bat our eyes** at eachother !! We truly are lucky to have such an audience as you !!! This really means the world to me....you writing this and all your comments about the subject....thank you a million times over. **curtsies

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



PhaerieChild
Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon
10 posted 1999-09-19 11:06 PM


Femme you are more than welcome but I think I can say that for a least a few of us we can either remember when love was new or can't wait for love to be new. I personally have been reading some of these to my husband. Your poems and Michael's and he thinks it is wonderful. He says that if you guys keep it up he may have to learn to write poetry just to keep my eyes on him. Kidding of course. He's a Michael too so I guess I'll keep him. LOL I seriously doubt that we'll ever get tired of watching you two "bat your eyes" at each other.

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Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
11 posted 1999-09-20 04:55 PM


I couldn't agree more!!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
12 posted 2004-04-23 12:30 PM


those were the days...sigh
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