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On a good day |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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On a good day She enchants me like morning's dew With new born shadows passing thru. Like odors, of the dawn of morn From scented flowers still unborn. She delights me with downy gay Like bobbing butterflies at play. She chitchats like the birds that sing Their wakefulness of new born spring. She steeps her humor like a tea And serve the doses guiltlessly. With plumb uniqueness of a child And wisdom of the undefiled. She banquets me. A shameless spread. And though enchantment is inbred Creation of our common needs I am in awe, her common deeds. On these days she plays Santa Claus And I her child of wild applause. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Oh Sy....what a lovely day this is  (applause!) ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
caroline, Thank you so much for the read and comment. |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Seymour, This sounds like a wonderful day. You did a really nice job with the imagery. I really enjoyed it. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- ..."to thine own self be true." >William Shakespeare |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Julie, Thank you for the read and comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another goody! ------------------ Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dsnyder, Your goody is like a piece of candy to me. *L* |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
So Seymour, what on earth happens on a bad day? I like this, I do! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Severn, On a bad day I think of a good one. thanks for the comment. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sweet |
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