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The barber
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The barber |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The barber You are the barber. The power of words cut distinctively. The phrase, sits patiently in the chair. The hair is sheer with a sharp scissor. Your styling depends on your past. The wild hairs will cut with the tame. To finish into a sleek version of Interpretation. You bring up the mirror. And nod with approve. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent, as usual. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
clever.very enjoyable read ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Nice haircut there, Seymour!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Passing shadows, Pepper and suthern, thank you all for your comments and kind words. Been away a day and I'm alreay on the 2nd page. *L* to all. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another good one, Seymour! It's always a pleasure of course! ------------------ Denise |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very good, Sy! This is an unusual analogy but I like it very much! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dsnyder and Poet deVine. I thank you much for the approval. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Excellent anology...loved it!! ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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