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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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I live with you in my mind I feel you here in my heart each day has 24 hours and yet - we live apart I dance around my words too scared to speak as I feel the world continues on yet nothing to me feels real The invisible love that pulls me is made of strings of finest gold I am what I am my emotions - so hard to control I wake each day - sleep each night hour in hour out - spent apart at night I dream, my head on a pillow separately, but close in heart.... ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is great RainbowGirl, I can relate to this. Well written  ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 09-19-99).] |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
sigh ... I know the feeling ... Is it just me, or is EVERYONE in this place in love long-distance? This was lovely, Rainbow ... Nocht ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Thanks...I was thinking aloud with my fingers.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Absolutely beautiful Rainbow Girl...has that nasty bug bitten you too. All this spring fever going around and it's nearly fall I can relate to this one big time ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Thank you, Rainbow, for sharing your feelings about me with everyone here....hehehe..well, I can dream, can't I?! |
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Jim Raynor Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 63Churubusco Indiana USA |
Wow thats all i can say thats a great poem... -Jim ------------------ $*%Jim Raynor%*$ |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Hoot: My lips are sealed...  HUGS Balladeer: Of course you may dream... HUGS Jim:..Bless you...it's great when your thoughts reach out to others.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 09-19-99).] |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
wow, the feeling the poem gives you is of love and caring, and then that last line just stays in your mind, beautiful! |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
I love the way you think with your fingers ... The professors in the academy say, "Do not make the model more beautiful than she is," and my soul whispers, "O if you could only paint the model as beautiful as she really is." |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
lovely Rainbow....... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
RainbowGirl, Beautiful poem. Concise and perfect, too. Thank you. Tyson |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Iloveit: Thanks.. HUSG JTF: In Red, White and Blue?..*g*..ooops HUSG Pepper: Thanks.. HUGS Johnt300: Thank you.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
RG, you mean the Union Jack ? |
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