Open Poetry #2 |
Ancient Acrostic |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ancient Acrostic I, Autumn done, and a Mode out of style, old, Antiquated, declining; Neglected, certainly seasoned... Can I be retired? Inducted into a quaint, Elderly domicile, though hoary, and pray that None may find me passé, or Traditional? ©KRJ 18 September, 1999 ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Perfect! Love this one, Sunshine! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Sunshine, this is exceptional.....so well written... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very well done!! ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Well Stated! We are only as old as we allow ourselves to be. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Sunshine, I truly love this one!! Perfect... ------------------ Helewes |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you everyone. These are turning out to be more fun than work! |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Sunshine, this is EXCELLENT!!! Brava! ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well done indeed! ------------------ Denise |
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