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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston 
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An offer of an open hand, an open heart to you. In return you offer friendship, simple, pure and true. So many friends have come and gone destinies unknown. But rarely does one come along with qualities you’ve shown. You’ve not delved into my private life or asked a lot of me. Just offering your quiet strength in word and poetry. You’ve taught me how to view the world with someone else’s eyes. That though each person looks for truth, they must also search for lies. Two opposites attract sometimes each sharing a small part. Of pain and pleasure, tears and smiles, personality and heart. I am proud that we could overcome the differences we had. We found the strength to share our feelings, some were happy and some sad. I hope that in the future we will remain friends you and I forging little differences and finding friendship binds that tie. Please accept from me these simple words that I have put to rhyme. I pray that forever you will allow me to call you a friend of mine. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Lucie...you have said so much here. This is a beautiful tribute for Dream. And you will find that his friendship is as unique and wonderful as he is. I know I truly treasure him.  ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nice Lucie ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A lovely tribute poem! I'm sure he'll be thrilled to read it!  |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Lucie, this was a great poem, and such a nice tribute (for lack of another word) to DreamEvil. I enjoyed it-nice to know how people are brought together here. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Lucie, I must say....you sound stricken ?? We should talk !! Let me feel your forehead - I can remember when you were screaming about him !!  I see you've kissed and made up ! BRAVO !------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Hey Lucie, Let's get in a really big fight - just so you can write me something like this when we make up. Seriously, this is so well written and so touching at the same time, I found it quite extraordinary. Michael |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
You keep Femme occupied the way you have and we may fight Michael..hehe.. You gotta share dude!! Thanks, glad you liked the poem. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Shoot, Lucie - if Dreamie doesn't like this poem, can you repost it for me???? I'd love to have something this well written just for me. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautifully said, a worthy tribute to a new friendship. It's the lasting kind that matter.. ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Well now, finally have I arrived at this wonderful tribute to me. Echo all of the above, dear friend and add to it my own feelings of friendship for you. 'Twas indeed a rocky start to our friendship, yet that let me know you all the better. Thank you very much for this verse, Lucie. pFF, I'll leave kissing you to Michael but I wouldn't mind the making up to settle our differences. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Lucie, a wonderful tribute for a wonderful person. Loved it ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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