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Sweet Delight |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Mounting desire greets my fevered mind as I walk down the candy aisle each M&M, each Milky Way gives rise to my wanton smile Baby Ruth, Pay Day too all beckon me to a taste Snickers bars and Jujube’s that settle around my waist I pass them up for other things like carrots and celery sticks but hear them calling from the shelf those Red Vines and Pixie Stix Halloween is just around the bend so there’s plenty of bags in the store Candy Corn and Cracker Jacks and Peanut Butter Cups galore Then there will be Christmas Candy Canes are a sweet delight Homemade Fudge and Divinity dance in my dreams each night But I leave without a sweet being good for one more day knowing that again I’ve held those ‘candy cravings’ at bay! |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
AAAACCCKKKKK!!! PDV....CANDY??? I was on my way out to the store...Now I'm going to have to stay here and get this drooling under control! heheheh Good one!  ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I am not really a candy lover..can take it or leave it...this was a challenge from DE. I asked for some phrases and he gave me one in this poem. Can you guess which line was his? |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Gotta be that first one...heheheh You did well with this challenge! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
PdV, "red vines and pixie stix" would be my guess as to DE's challenging lines... how far off am I? |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
It was the first line...I'm sure he didn't think I'd write about candy with that line! LOL |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
We can always count on a deVine deLight... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Poet deVine, I think what you gave him here is a Lickerish Twist. Enjoyed the poem. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Yum,peanut butter cups !! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ever tried to name all the candy bars you can? A hard task indeed!  |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
You are what you eat and this is truly sweet, dear Lady deVine. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
DeVine one, I LOVE your banner!!!....and the poem. |
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