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juanita
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 68
Los Angeles, CA, USA

0 posted 1999-09-17 01:44 PM


The sensual movements
you apply to stretch,
to yawn, intrigue me so.
The softness of that
flexible body that can
lay there in inspiring
contemplation...
reminds me of a ballerina.

Your elegance is regal
mysterious feline
the aloofness as you walk
the certainty of being the boss
kitty-cat to you-
I salute!
your banquet please enjoy.

Purring in my ear
kneading on my chest
arousing my curiosity
displaying such control
your gracefulness is bold
my weakness I confess
is in falling deep in love
with a presence so detached.

© Copyright 1999 juanita - All Rights Reserved
suthern
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1 posted 1999-09-17 01:49 PM


Wonderful tribute to our furry friends!
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-09-17 02:23 PM


Very nicely written words about our furry little friends

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

juanita
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 68
Los Angeles, CA, USA
3 posted 1999-09-18 12:53 PM


Thank you, Suthern and Hoot for your comments.
johnt300
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since 1999-09-12
Posts 214
san diego, ca.
4 posted 1999-09-18 06:35 PM


Juanita,
Great poem. I love cats and this one says it all. I couldn't resist with one of my own, either. thanks.
Tyson

Richard 33
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since 1999-09-09
Posts 187
glen easton, wv usa
5 posted 1999-09-18 07:41 PM


Nice poem,good job!!! Just in case you
missed the post I put for you on my poem,
I decided to post on your's too, so you
would not miss it. Just wanted to say thanks
very much for the flowers' on my post, and
yes you may print my poem, and take it to school, I would be honored!!!.............

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 1999-09-18 08:40 PM


Great job, there is a music or sensuality to cats, and their aloofness makes their moments of rare affection that much more special. We have two felines, we love them dearly and they delight us daily.

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~



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