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Justin Thyme
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Oz

0 posted 1999-09-18 10:02 AM


On top of the Passions
all covered with rhyme...
I lost my on-top spot
to ol' Justin Thyme.

He posted some poetry
that eveyone liked-
Then ended up on top
oh boy, was he psyched!

He made all the others
chuckle and cry
This ol' Justin Thyme dude
is one poet guy!

He wrote about hatred
He wrote about love
The rhymes that he posted
He was quite proud of.

And so Justin Thyme dude
was moved to the top.
The others responded
it seemed like nonstop!

Who is this guy, Justin?
Who's posting this rhyme?
He entered the forums
to post just in time.

So all of you poets
please, thanks, do not stop!
Respond to dear Justin
and push him on top!
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hehehe
-Justin T.



© Copyright 1999 Justin Thyme - All Rights Reserved
Pepper
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1 posted 1999-09-18 10:07 AM


here's one for you Justin......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

caroline
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2 posted 1999-09-18 10:49 AM


Oh No...I can't do this again today! My sides still hurt from laughing last night!



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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Justin Thyme
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Oz
3 posted 1999-09-18 10:58 AM


Have you ever noticed that some people respond to their own poetry just to push it back on top? The nerve........


hehehe
-Justin T.

Justin Kace
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Oz
4 posted 1999-09-18 11:34 AM


...you're slipping down, I'll bump you, Justin Thyme...
Lucie
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5 posted 1999-09-18 12:09 PM


ok here you go Justin, I'm an equal opportunity booster..hahahah..
hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 1999-09-18 12:12 PM


Okay Justin, if this wasn't so darn funny...here you go

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Lorelei54
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7 posted 1999-09-18 12:31 PM


from a fellow netpoet..you go up again
Miss Behavin'
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8 posted 1999-09-18 12:44 PM


Thyme & Thyme again....
poetFemmeFatale
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9 posted 1999-09-18 02:01 PM


Are you a spice ??

Hey, what is it about all these men who demand to be on TOP !!!???? I say that's the woman's spot ! Hoo-rah Hoo-rah !! Back to the top you go ! I feel like I'm in a wrestling match, and with an alligator! (they spin their prey)....argh!

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



Miss Behavin'
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10 posted 1999-09-18 02:08 PM


But they can't serpentine...


Justin Thyme
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Oz
11 posted 1999-09-18 02:20 PM


Am I a spice? hehehe.... i guess i am, come to think of it.... i am a sage (check my profile)

thank you friends for your support


hehehe
Justin T.

Michael
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12 posted 1999-09-18 02:33 PM


Conspirators! - Ye all Shall pay dearly for this! The King shall never fall!!


KING Michael

Pepper
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13 posted 1999-09-18 03:02 PM


go Justin go......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

BrightLight
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14 posted 1999-09-18 03:21 PM


Is this another parade to join in on, Wow this is getting interesting. I don't hear the bagpipes in this one, I guess maybe I was mistaken in the other parade, unless it was a nasal problem.(ha,ha) guess I'll never know.
poetFemmeFatale
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15 posted 1999-09-18 03:50 PM


All hail KING Michael, hail the KING !!!! he he he

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



doreen peri
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16 posted 1999-09-18 06:24 PM


Back to the top, and just in time, too!
-dp

Lost Dreamer
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17 posted 1999-09-18 06:52 PM


Justin, I guess now I will help to get you up the post ladder. I hope Nan doesn't threaten to lock you up too. We out foxed her with Michael's, let's hope we can do the same with you.
Jay_Jay
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18 posted 1999-09-18 07:02 PM


Here's a boost for ya

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Never allow life to get in the way of living...

Crystal
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19 posted 1999-09-18 07:05 PM



Crystal
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20 posted 1999-09-18 07:07 PM








pandora
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21 posted 1999-09-18 07:19 PM


Whoa! What's going on in here? Some kind of contest? Hi, Justin. Nice meeting you. I like this poem, it's cute. HOw long have you been hanging around? I haven't been here for so long, there's soooooo many new names!

Well, if you like on top, here you go!

ONE FLEW OVER
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22 posted 1999-09-18 08:40 PM


Hey Justin how ya doing? Looks like they let you out too, funny how we would find the same place to go after being released. Gosh I forgot you told me about this place, guess I lost my head for the moment. Well don't let any of the psychos get ya.
Justbleu
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23 posted 1999-09-19 02:40 AM


Hello Justin, Here ya go, up, up and away!!
This place is still crazy but, I love it!!!!


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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Justbleu


Andrew Scott
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24 posted 1999-09-19 03:36 AM


Nice write Justin... deserves a lift... besides, I'm giving that other guy a lift and you're on my way. So hop on, plenty of room in the back... drinks in the cooler and chips on the floor. Buckle in, its the law ya know. Here ya go.
Justin Thyme
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Oz
25 posted 1999-09-19 07:42 AM


Hey you, ONE FLEW!

Who let *YOU* outa the 'stute? They kept telling me I had a split personality! Imagine that, wouldja? But, yeah, I'm out now. No more miss ratchet forcin' meds down my throat. Whew! Hey, buddy, glad you remembered to meet me at this place. Thanks for kicking me up top one more time. See ya around.... HERE, I hope.... not back at the 'stute. No NUThouse is big enough for the two of us.

hehehe-
Justin T.

Pepper
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26 posted 1999-09-19 09:22 AM


I really enjoy your humor....so away you go....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

moonmoon
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27 posted 1999-09-19 09:31 AM



Hmmm...here's my 2 cents...

ONE FLEW OVER
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28 posted 1999-09-19 10:01 AM


Justin, I'm working hard not to find my way back there. This world out here though it seems so crazy. People saluting each other, saying yes Sir. What's going on here? Am I missing something?
Justin Kace
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Oz
29 posted 1999-09-19 11:04 AM


...Geesh - I found you, Justin Thyme..
Denise
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30 posted 1999-09-19 12:53 PM


Cute too!

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Denise

Emmy
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31 posted 1999-09-19 01:02 PM


Well, well, well... looks like we have a little competition within our forum!!! Everybody wants to be on top! I feel like a complete traitor here, 'cause I was the one who pushed "KING" Michael's post past the record . Hahaha, I can hear it now, the crowds standing in the streets, shouting "OFF WITH HER HEAD! OFF WITH HER HEAD!" Please, I beg of you, spare me my head Michael, for how is one supposed to write poetry without it? LOL... a boost for you, Justin Thyme...
Justin Thyme
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32 posted 1999-09-19 04:49 PM


Hey! Hey big bro' Justin (Kace, that is)... thanks for coming to my rescue!

ONE FLEW-You're seeing people saluting each other? and saying Yes, Sir!? Ummmm.... well, maybe they *should* take you back to the 'stute, my friend. Are you sure you're alright? Hope this is a trip you wanna take! If not, think twice before you drop another hit.

Thanks again, all you guys, for the kick up to the top! I'll rescue you sometime, too. HEY! That rhymes. Rescue you... sometime too. Rescue you.... sometime too.

I guess I'm a poet and I know it.

Oh, and pandora, thanks a lot, babe, for introducing yourself. You must be a pretty kewl chick.

later.

hehehe
-Justin T.

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Somewhere near the Rainbow
33 posted 1999-09-19 06:07 PM


For you,
Lost Dreamer
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34 posted 1999-09-19 06:07 PM


the sun shines
Lost Dreamer
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35 posted 1999-09-19 06:08 PM


through the tree tops
Lost Dreamer
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36 posted 1999-09-19 06:10 PM


baking you in it's essense
Lost Dreamer
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37 posted 1999-09-19 06:11 PM


until the time
Lost Dreamer
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38 posted 1999-09-19 06:12 PM


the moons glow
Jim Raynor
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39 posted 1999-09-19 06:12 PM


i wanna be on top 1 went over 100 replys so lets see how high we can get this one hehe

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$*%Jim Raynor%*$

Lost Dreamer
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40 posted 1999-09-19 06:12 PM


has cast a shadow over you.
Lost Dreamer
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41 posted 1999-09-19 06:19 PM


Rise & Shine and forever smile as you walk the mighty miles of life.
Systematic Decay
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That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
42 posted 1999-09-19 06:26 PM


hey, what the hell......
here ya go

Artur Hawkwing
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43 posted 1999-09-19 06:35 PM


what
Artur Hawkwing
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44 posted 1999-09-19 06:36 PM


goes
Artur Hawkwing
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45 posted 1999-09-19 06:36 PM


up
Artur Hawkwing
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46 posted 1999-09-19 06:36 PM


must
Artur Hawkwing
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47 posted 1999-09-19 06:36 PM


come
Artur Hawkwing
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48 posted 1999-09-19 06:36 PM


down
Artur Hawkwing
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49 posted 1999-09-19 06:37 PM


NOT!
BrightLight
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50 posted 1999-09-19 07:18 PM


Up,up
BrightLight
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51 posted 1999-09-19 07:19 PM


and away
BrightLight
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52 posted 1999-09-19 07:20 PM


in my beautiful
BrightLight
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53 posted 1999-09-19 07:20 PM


Balloon.
pandora
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54 posted 1999-09-19 08:14 PM


you guys are nuts.... well, one of you is a bit NUT!! and the rest of you are just plain.... crazy

ok, justin, here's to ya!

Severn
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55 posted 1999-09-19 08:20 PM


I just had to see what the fuss was all about. You were already on top when I read this - so sorry, I didn't make a difference!!!!
WhtDove
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56 posted 1999-09-19 08:20 PM


Geez, gone for part of a day and look what I miss. Another clown to join the crowd. Back up to the top ya go.
Justin Thyme
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Oz
57 posted 1999-09-19 10:46 PM


mwahahahaha.............

got brightlite carried away, eh what? hehehe...

geesh...

it ain't the QUANTITY of responses... it's the QUALITY

yippeee, thanks for puttin' me on top, you guys! LOL... i haven't had so much fun since ...well, can't get into that....... ummm.... yesterday

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hehehe
-Justin T.

pandora
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58 posted 1999-09-20 12:25 PM


justin..you're a pretty funny guy... ok, here's to ya! back up top

luv pan

Lost Dreamer
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59 posted 1999-09-20 06:10 PM


bumpidy, bumpidy, bump
Jim Raynor
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60 posted 1999-09-20 06:17 PM


heres another maybe later i will put you over 100

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$*%Jim Raynor%*$

doreen peri
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61 posted 1999-09-20 07:16 PM


Don't you guys have anything better to do? hehehe.... ok, up you go again, justin
ONE FLEW OVER
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62 posted 1999-09-20 07:57 PM


Justin I'm back to raise you to the top again. Your amazing buddy getting all these people to respond to you. How do you do it you must have a lot of pull around here. Well glad to see your making something of yourself since getting away from Miss Crachet's crabby net. Maybe one day she'll get caught in her own net then she'll have a taste of her own medicine. Enough about that great going here Justin keep it up!
Justin Kace
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63 posted 1999-09-20 08:49 PM


...you didn't know it.... My twin brother is a schizo - He's got multiple personalities - some of them are even girls.....Yuck!!
BrightLight
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64 posted 1999-09-21 07:30 AM


Here's the boost you needed.
Justin Thyme
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Oz
65 posted 1999-12-01 03:18 PM


Looks like we're racing for the top
again, dear poet friends.
We thought that all of this did stop,
but I guess it doesn't end.

Reminds me of the 'stute where all
we Justins stay with 'toons.
It goes on and on and on and on
forever, many moons!

Well, anyway, I'm here to say
I WANNA BE ON TOP 2!
And so I'll push this right on top
'cause what else can I do?

Nurse Crachet
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They know where I am!
66 posted 1999-12-02 09:28 PM


I here to do my deed for a Justin dude.
Now don't you go saying
I never help you out.

Michael
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67 posted 1999-12-03 12:05 PM


So my friends, I plainly see,
We have not learned from history.
So, doomed we are, 'er to repeat
The quest of two, but one may meet.
To be the King of forum two.
So long ago I set out to do.
That once enjoyed, now, distant past?
King for a day, It wouldn't last.
For along came Justin Thyme,
With cutting wit, and so so rhyme.
To divide my kingdom once true,
Just cause he wanted on top 2.
With the backing of the whole 'stute,
I won't last long, I can't dispute,
So up you go, if through my sighs...
At least I'm still King of replies.

150 at last count....LOL


King Michael

Justin Thyme
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Oz
68 posted 1999-12-04 05:03 PM


Whaddya mean so-so rhyme? LOL... you got a lotta nerve for a King... most Kings try to be a bit more diplomatic. Oh well. I guess you win.

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The King of Two.
That must be you.
You are the best.
You passed the test.
You're number one.
I guess I'm done.
This so-so rhyme
by Justin Thyme
is posted here,
but have no fear,
someone will bring
on top the King
and you will win
on top again.
I'm Number Two
but that's not new
and I don't care,
I like it there.
I could be last
because you're fast
to get replies
and much more wise
than I am, King,
to thee I sing.
Intead of write,
I'll paint tonight,
and not compete
to to top repeat.
No so-so art
will Justin start!


signed,
Justin Thyme, So-So Poet
aka Leonardo DaVinci
Artiste Extraordinaire

Dawne
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69 posted 1999-12-05 02:32 AM


Hi Justin
Justbleu
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70 posted 2000-09-11 10:59 PM


Back again to send you flying high.....
I was reading poetry in here and saw this again....and laughed!! I'd forgotten all about this little competition that was goin on in here!!!!
Take Care
Bridgette


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

wayoutwalt
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71 posted 2000-10-19 12:14 PM


hehehehe yuhuyuhuyuyhy i too am afraid of page two
Walking Contradiction
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72 posted 2000-11-16 01:11 AM


Up and over..fellow sage

No competi-tion...
The results (like the elections) Just-in!!!



kaile
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73 posted 2000-11-21 11:16 AM


interesting reading
passing shadows
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cute
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