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No Greater Love |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA 
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Let this raging love consume me like a hundred hungry fires let heaven play a rhapsody like a thousand singing lyres. Let this flame grow ever brighter till it puts the sun to shame let the stars and planets tremble ever time I speak your name. Like a river flowing, seeking mother ocean to embrace love like ours goes on forever never knowing time nor space. Let the atoms of our being swirl into an endless maze searching, finding, always loving till the ending of my days. Then let me rest with in the night of death, before I call your name and when you answer, I will come to love you once again. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I liked this one a lot Echo ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Oh wow...this is really a nice one! I'd love to see it formatted to do the eloquence of your words justice. I love it! ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
There's a mellifluent Echo in here...  |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
wonderfull echo wonderfull echo... |
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Loneheart Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 92Eastern US |
Truly thou art a great poet my friend loved this one |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
very beautiful Echo...... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
*blush* Thank you everyone =u) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I really loved this one Echo... ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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Jay_Jay Junior Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 38San Diego, CA. USA |
Once again Echo, a very beautiful poem. You have such a passion in you, and a wonderful talent. I hope to read more in the future. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Thank you Isis I am glad that you liked it =u) and Jay_Jay, there are a few other of my poems on here as well, and I will continue to add more in the future too, just look for them. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Another fantastic piece! Just awesome is your work. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I'm starting to get very impressed here. : ) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful indeed! You are so talented, Echo! Everything that you write is a pleasure to read! ------------------ Denise |
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Phoebee Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 42Peoria, AZ |
I must say that you have a great talent. |
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