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~*~ if I Took ~*~
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA 
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If I took this blade and slit my wrist, could you tell me that I'd be missed? If I took this gun and shot my head, would you care that I was dead? If I took these pills and numbed my mind, should you care that I was kind? If I took this rope and tied a noose, would you try and cut me loose? If I took my life and didn't care, could you promise to be there? If I took your hand and held it tight, would you be with me throughout the night? |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
very intense.. I would be there for you! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ouch...I was getting a bit worried there, about to call 911...glad you threw in that last stanza for born romantics such as myself! ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
No need to call 911 =u) If you are interested in one of my favourite poems I put one on here last night. It's titled ~*~ NOBODY ~*~ Have a look if you owuld like =u) |
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Jay_Jay Junior Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 38San Diego, CA. USA |
I am moving this one to the top too...everyone who reads it, I think we need to let Echo know that we would be there, I know I would be! But I can only speak for myself. I can honestly answer yes to all these questions! ------------------ Never allow life to get in the way of living... |
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Sean Junior Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 17Holtville, CA. USA |
I would be definitely be there, no doubt about it! And in the future, I will always be there too! ------------------ When no one else understands, a friend will! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
You know I'd be there for you! As I hope knowing what I know now. That you would never attempt this again. You are a bright and caring wonderful person. HUGS...I would certainly be hurt and missing you dear one! |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I must admit, after reading all seven of your poems, I am impressed by how you translate your inner feelings. I read some of your poems in open and I can assure you I will be looking forward to more of your poems. And thank you Whtdove for bringing them back to to the top again. : ) |
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