Open Poetry #2 |
~*~ Nobody ~*~ |
Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Have you ever felt like nobody just a tiny speck of air when everyone's around you and you are just not there? When you are very lonely and no one seems to care when everyone ignores you and acts like you're not there? Have you ever felt like nobody when friends make fun of you when people say we're friends but it really sint true? Sometimes you feel like you're unloved and no one wants to care when everyone has a friend and you're alone somewhere? Have you ever felt like nobody just a tiny speck of dirt you're always getting stepped on and always getting hurt? I guess if you have then you know how I feel but because I am a person in time will I heal? |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You will heal, in time we all do, no matter how big it seems at the time. Love the poem and Welcome!!: ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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BrightLight Junior Member
since 1999-09-07
Posts 45 |
Wow, I saw myself in your poem like I was looking in a mirror. It's when the insecurities of my being decide it's time for them to shine, that I take to falling into despair for no apparent reason. Your poem is excellent, it opened up my mind to see a person that lurks inside that I prefer to hide. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Thank you Isis and BrightLight for you comments. I appreciate them =u) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Echo...even the toughest scars heal in time. I think we've all been there from time to time...and so you know you are not a nobody...I'll bump you back to the top. ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Oh my sweet girl! I know where you come from. I've felt like many times...I really like how you put this. Sometimes we feel so insignificant. But we all have purpose! It will get better. You will heal! |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Very good poem ! Yes, I know how that feels and time will heal you eventually, but first, I learned, I had to start loving myself. : ) |
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