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Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

0 posted 1999-09-17 04:30 AM


Have you ever felt like nobody
just a tiny speck of air
when everyone's around you
and you are just not there?
When you are very lonely
and no one seems to care
when everyone ignores you
and acts like you're not there?

Have you ever felt like nobody
when friends make fun of you
when people say we're friends
but it really sint true?
Sometimes you feel like you're unloved
and no one wants to care
when everyone has a friend
and you're alone somewhere?

Have you ever felt like nobody
just a tiny speck of dirt
you're always getting stepped on
and always getting hurt?
I guess if you have
then you know how I feel
but because I am a person
in time will I heal?

© Copyright 1999 Echo Rhayne - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-09-17 06:50 AM


You will heal, in time we all do, no matter how big it seems at the time.
Love the poem and Welcome!!:

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~



BrightLight
Junior Member
since 1999-09-07
Posts 45

2 posted 1999-09-17 07:28 AM


Wow, I saw myself in your poem like I was looking in a mirror. It's when the insecurities of my being decide it's time for them to shine, that I take to falling into despair for no apparent reason. Your poem is excellent, it opened up my mind to see a person that lurks inside that I prefer to hide.
Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
3 posted 1999-09-17 05:28 PM


Thank you Isis and BrightLight for you comments. I appreciate them =u)
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 1999-09-18 02:12 AM


Echo...even the toughest scars heal in time. I think we've all been there from time to time...and so you know you are not a nobody...I'll bump you back to the top.

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
5 posted 1999-10-30 02:34 PM


Oh my sweet girl! I know where you come from.

I've felt like many times...I really like how you put this. Sometimes we feel so insignificant. But we all have purpose! It will get better. You will heal!

Munda
Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
6 posted 1999-10-30 03:54 PM


Very good poem ! Yes, I know how that feels and time will heal you eventually, but first, I learned, I had to start loving myself. : )
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