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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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He lulls me into soundest sleep - his voice a mystery I still keep. Powerfully, he pulls me near with words of love, I hold so dear. His words they put me in a trance... He is why my soul knows dance. He is my god - he is erotic... He is sublime - he is hypnotic. He is the one who knows my heart - He's cherished me right from the start. He is the one I long to hold at night when darkness feels so cold. He is my soul - makes me complete... However did we connect & meet? He is my wonder - my shining star... He is my love whether near or far. ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautifully written, and hang onto him with all your might...: ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wonderfully romantic..a poetic perfection. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
As perfectly and and beautifully wrought as Michael's poem....Brava! ------------------ "We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?" --John Keating, Dead Poets Society |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Thank you girls...your understanding is so appreciated...***curtsies to all ! ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
He is speechless right about now. Longing to be held in your arms, He is also feeling quite lucky where he stands, I would imagine... Michael |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
PFF, Well you convinced me. I guess I'm out of the picture. Loved the poem. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Oh Seymour, you're so amusing!! You know I'm a fan of yours, although most of what you write makes me have to Think real hard !!! (wink) *** Thank you Michael...glad to make you speechless...  ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Mark R. Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 113San Francisco, CA. |
So much love and affection within these few lines...it's absolutely hypnotic. I envy the man who receives your adoration. Wonderfully written.... |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Well and truly do I wish and believe that my Lady echoes these same sentiments about me. Michael, hold on to your Lady and be sure to tell her frequently of your love for her. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
You truly know how to show your love in verse...truly inspiring. ------------------ Helewes |
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beowulf_26 Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 183 |
*sigh*  I truly admire these feelings you have for another. One day I'll feel that way 'bout someone.------------------ Opinions are like bellybuttons: eveybody's got 'em and they're good for nothing. |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
And More WARM FUZZIES!!! I love it!! ------------------ Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild |
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