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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
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0 posted 1999-09-16 09:01 PM


Now and forever my heart hears one voice.
Romance between us burns forever strong.
Forever and always she is my choice.
She fills my heart with ebullient song.

Romance between us burns forever strong.
The heat of her passions burns me like fire.
She fills my heart with ebullient song.
Her presence bathes me in heart-felt desire.

The heat of her passions burn me like fire.
Lies are silenced by the strength of her Light.
Her presence bathes me in heart-felt desire.
Her voice is my guide through eternal night.

Lies are silenced by the strength of her Light.
Her burning kiss makes me yearn for release.
Her voice is my guide through eternal night.
Nightly she brings me some semblance of peace.

Her burning kiss makes me yearn for release.
The truth of her will never go unheard.
Nightly she brings me some semblance of peace.
She caresses my soul with every word.

The truth of her will never go unheard.
Forever and always she is my choice.
She caresses my soul with every word.
Now and forever my heart hears one voice.


©1999 DreamEvil



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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvil©



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Tara Simms
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1 posted 1999-09-16 09:10 PM


Beautiful, Dream. Such a lucky lady.
caroline
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2 posted 1999-09-16 09:12 PM


Romantic...lovely, Dream.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Michael
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3 posted 1999-09-16 09:15 PM


Beautiful DreamEvil,
Alas, we are on a wavelength one, the same. You have served ~one voice~ well with this work.

Michael

Beki
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since 1999-09-15
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4 posted 1999-09-16 09:17 PM


This is form is delicious..I love the repeated lines...almost like a villanelle but not quite.....the language is quite lovely, rolls right off the tongue like honey. Excellent poem! :-)

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society

Christopher
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5 posted 1999-09-16 09:24 PM


You know, I'm not ashamed to say that sometimes I wish I was a girl... too darn many romantics guys in here...
Dream, you bear a beautiful voice yourself when you choose to use it in such a way!

Hold onto this guy one~voice... I think he may be worth it!

DreamEvil
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6 posted 1999-09-17 02:23 AM


Christopher, I don't need to think about it anymore at all. I KNOW she is well worth keeping.

Michael, I've taken great pride in the fact I serve nothing and no one but my own interests. 'Tis different now. You are right, I serve her well.
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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvil©




[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 09-17-99).]

Ominous
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since 1999-07-04
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7 posted 1999-09-17 02:38 AM


Oh so beautiful Dream.
One Voice is truly lucky to have someone like you.

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I am but a shadow, lost within this world of darkness

DreamEvil
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8 posted 1999-09-17 05:50 PM


Her voice will not be silent in these forums, again I will not allow it.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


JennyLee
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9 posted 1999-09-17 06:40 PM


Bravo DE.....
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