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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Romance between us burns forever strong. Forever and always she is my choice. She fills my heart with ebullient song. Romance between us burns forever strong. The heat of her passions burns me like fire. She fills my heart with ebullient song. Her presence bathes me in heart-felt desire. The heat of her passions burn me like fire. Lies are silenced by the strength of her Light. Her presence bathes me in heart-felt desire. Her voice is my guide through eternal night. Lies are silenced by the strength of her Light. Her burning kiss makes me yearn for release. Her voice is my guide through eternal night. Nightly she brings me some semblance of peace. Her burning kiss makes me yearn for release. The truth of her will never go unheard. Nightly she brings me some semblance of peace. She caresses my soul with every word. The truth of her will never go unheard. Forever and always she is my choice. She caresses my soul with every word. Now and forever my heart hears one voice. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Pain is life, life is short, I will endure. DreamEvil© |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Beautiful, Dream. Such a lucky lady. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Romantic...lovely, Dream. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautiful DreamEvil, Alas, we are on a wavelength one, the same. You have served ~one voice~ well with this work. Michael |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
This is form is delicious..I love the repeated lines...almost like a villanelle but not quite.....the language is quite lovely, rolls right off the tongue like honey. Excellent poem! :-) ------------------ "We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?" --John Keating, Dead Poets Society |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
You know, I'm not ashamed to say that sometimes I wish I was a girl... too darn many romantics guys in here... Dream, you bear a beautiful voice yourself when you choose to use it in such a way! Hold onto this guy one~voice... I think he may be worth it! |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Christopher, I don't need to think about it anymore at all. I KNOW she is well worth keeping. Michael, I've taken great pride in the fact I serve nothing and no one but my own interests. 'Tis different now. You are right, I serve her well. ------------------ Pain is life, life is short, I will endure. DreamEvil© [This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 09-17-99).] |
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Ominous Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 68Canada |
Oh so beautiful Dream. One Voice is truly lucky to have someone like you. ------------------ I am but a shadow, lost within this world of darkness |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Her voice will not be silent in these forums, again I will not allow it. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Bravo DE..... |
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