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mojar
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since 1999-11-09
Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

0 posted 1999-11-14 04:21 PM


Passion wells inside of me,like a raging fire out of control. My life has always been like the peace and calm of the forest. Just as if someone carelessly lit a fire, and walked away from it and left it unattended.
The fire begins as a small heat that grows and grows until it becomes an inferno that consumes everything in it's path. One glimpse of you was the ignition source, that has been responsible for the fire that consumes me. The heights of the passion that your have sparked cannot outrun or outdistance the entireity of the consumation that has taken out all of the idle, ungrowing life, to replace it with new vitality and hope, for a brighter tomorrow.

me.

© Copyright 1999 mojar - All Rights Reserved
Maverick Wolf
Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 94
Scandia, MN
1 posted 1999-11-14 10:38 PM


Very interesting. I found it quite easy to relate to.
Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
2 posted 1999-11-14 11:40 PM


Nice, Mo.

Passion's fire...

DB

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And the men who hold high places
Must be the ones who start
To mold a new reality
Closer to the heart.
===RUSH===

angelrocket
Junior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 12
Salt Lake City, Utah USA
3 posted 1999-11-15 01:40 AM


Oh yes mojar...I have very similar feelings for a recent new love interest....
Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration
4 posted 1999-11-16 02:00 AM


Love is indeed like unto a fire...be careful lest ye get burned!
JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
5 posted 1999-11-21 12:46 PM


As always Mo...you are deeply romantic!
I enjoyed reading this so very much...it struck sparks of longing in my heart! Well Done


Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.


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