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Red
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since 2000-01-01
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0 posted 2021-08-05 12:55 PM


I haven't been here in many years, not sure why I thought of your love story today. Rivers of words and innocence; this was all another time, the tundra state before experience of high deserts and the real meaning of fires burning bright. There isn't much left after such discoveries beyond ash and the chalk of soot. Maybe fonts and forums and notes like this, maybe they still live on? Maybe, but there were no eyes then. There are a billion eyes now, and none simultaneously since we only see plagues, these days. But I tell you as I type these words, we live on. I'll leave you this note, maybe you will see it, more than likely not. Just know, I never burned in the flames. I will smolder for many lifetimes, passing by spaces in between my memories and dreams.


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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
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1 posted 2021-08-16 10:27 PM


Simply gorgeous writing here! I keep reading things tonight that spark a longing for another time and another state of mind.  

"I know this love will tear me to pieces
I know his hands will dig up my secrets"

Meg Myers


Larry C
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Member Patricius
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2 posted 2021-08-28 01:39 AM


Delightful farewell. Thank you for this.
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