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Karleygirl
Junior Member
since 2010-08-05
Posts 20


0 posted 2010-08-05 07:14 PM


have you ever wanted to talk but never really dared?
or missed the opportunity to tell him that you cared?
pretended that it didnt hurt
and said that its okay?
and spent each day wishing
it'd all just go away?
acted how you were "supposed to" and no one knew you cried?
and never let them know
how you really felt inside?
so now lets raise a glass
to mend your broken hearts
and forget about the pain
and keep going down this road of love
until you found your way!


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Novus_Os
Member
since 2010-07-21
Posts 115
West Coast, USA
1 posted 2010-08-08 12:31 PM


I would like to say that this is very good, the truth shouts (in the best sense) off the screen, and that it is a universal feeling expressed. Well done.

Regards,

Novus_Os

Life is meant to be enjoyed, not just endured.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2010-12-23 11:44 PM


Enjoyed...James
tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
3 posted 2011-11-16 07:19 AM


most will relate, I enjoyed this very much.

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



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