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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30
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New Orleans

0 posted 2009-07-31 11:16 PM



Say it isn't so! Words from the Lost? How annoyingly cliche.

I ever do wonder, ever do ponder.

I wonder if the rain has ever kissed the newly birthed smoke of a battle underway, soaking the hot blooded soldiers who scream in rage, fear, pain and perhaps even joy.

I ponder if this rain, this gift of life- as it has been proven that no life can exist without this gift has kissed the toxic breath of death. How is it that life and death could co-exist in the intertwined scarf of a battle? Do the Angles and Deamons battle within this scarf, as the breath turns to burning spit taking the lives of many. A patch of thread within a much bigger scarf, perhaps? Human lives, experiences, stories, threads- Swen together to form a scarf.


I ever do, ever will.

If pen is to needle, then thread is to sentences. I shall sew a story, write a scarf.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Oscar Wilde

© Copyright 2009 Zachariah Gavia-Peyton - All Rights Reserved
rad802
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since 2008-04-19
Posts 279
KY U.S.A.
1 posted 2009-08-02 01:47 PM


It is an interestng perspective.
I hope it is not necessary for me to supply any answers but certainly I consider you thoughts.
I think!

A worthy legacy is the irrevocable consequence of dreaming.
Rick A. Delmonico

priyanka
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since 2009-06-15
Posts 216
india
2 posted 2009-10-04 05:34 PM


great thoughts...made me go through all your posts!
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