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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
It was true boxing, (not that with gloves), punches in teeth, Jersey that we fire, a stunning general scuffle, one moment of privileged entertainment, the spectators laughing and fustigating islanders and sabres ....The battle leaving on the ice only some drops of blood, red as the passion of every man deprived to be able to take on his opponent.... What learn us they? That we are imperfect and limited. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Yann, This is interesting. Where did you see this? A |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Alison, it was while watching a kockey game between New Yprk and Buffalo, I never watched such a general scuffle, it was overwhelming.... hugs yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...reminded me of a boxing match I watched in Germany in the Army...the new guy inquired "Who's the meanest guy around? I'm calling him out for a boxing match...later that night they faced off on a mat in the gym with no gloves on and proceeded to pound the heck out of each other...it was finally called as a draw and they became good friends...the new guy won the respect he was looking for...James |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
This is an interesting experiment in prose writing. It's almost like a prose-based haiku. Good job. |
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