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Passions in Prose

To be Lost

Artofmark
Junior Member

since 2006-07-12

Posts 41

0 posted 2006-07-13 09:24 PM

Into your eyes I am lost, as a ship at sea
For I dont ponder the thought of land
I am with you and you with me,
i wish the hour glass had endless sand
as we can be together lost thou gaze
your stare is worth all words thought
to be lost with you is all i sought
you are my star in the darkest nite sky.
illuminating all so bright
glistening you provide the purest light,
To be lost for some is hell,
but from me its's heaven,
for into your eys lost, i have fell.

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

1 posted 2006-07-13 10:16 PM

I really like the idea in this one.. great job..

~heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

Artofmark
Junior Member

since 2006-07-12

Posts 41

2 posted 2006-07-13 10:22 PM

thanks ive only been writing for a short time

David D Jerald
Member

since 2006-08-07

Posts 74
Tucson, Arizona

3 posted 2006-08-09 02:51 AM

Good job Artofmark, Those eyes will get you every time. Tears will get you, sqinted eyes will get you, sly eyes, eyebrows over the eyes rasied, eys that won't look at you. Closed eyes when you know there not sleeping. Its tough world art, Always wear sunglasses.
Dave

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