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Passions in Prose

A novel: part 1

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2004-07-08 04:01 AM

She stood there staring unwelcome in a room full of shattered glass. A mirror hung askew, as if the earth had just rumbled through town. Roses, red roses in a crystal vase sit undisturbed in a path of disaster.

Without hesitation tears formed at the corners of her eyes, stopping to peer over the brim to peek at the rollercoaster they were about to embark on. An emotional ride they took down the hills of her cheeks, and the moguls of her lips. Falling six feet to the glass laden floor.

There they rested forevermore. On the glass that revealed a troubled mistake. Her skin crawling, as shivers of fear run down her spine. She breathes in shallow breaths of subdued reality.

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
Graduation : January 29th 2004

Jeffrey Carter

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since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

1 posted 2004-07-08 10:57 AM

gimme MOREEEEEEEEE!

Lexy
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since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

2 posted 2004-07-12 06:46 AM

gasp...this is amazing.
and I don't use that word often.

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

3 posted 2004-08-05 01:22 AM

Look for the final version: no evil(posted in passions in prose)

and in critical anal. Roses, crashing to the ground.

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