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Fariegirl
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 147


0 posted 2004-04-30 06:46 PM



Imagine.

Everything is great.

Your life is just starting.

You are 17.

Just finished 11th grade.

Walking home.

Headache.

Faint.

Doctor.

Blood test.

Not good.

Cancer.

Everything changes.

Stay in the hospital.

Friends come.

Less and less.

Then none.

Family breaks apart.

No more money.

Too many tears.

Then there is hope.

Experimental.

You decide.

Try it?

Yes.

It's time.

Anesthesia.

Wake up.

Bad news.

Didn't work.

All the sudden, time goes too quickly.

Two more weeks.

At most.

Now, come back to your real life. Be happy with how much time you have. Think of this whenever things look bad and remember, it could be worse.

© Copyright 2004 Kathryn Duncan - All Rights Reserved
pictureme
Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248
Ohio, USA
1 posted 2004-04-30 10:25 PM


so true my friend. When we are down and think we have it bad we should always look around us and understand there are others out there in worse shape. We need to make wise use of our time, as sick, or not sick, we never know how much time we have left.
One thing I have learned in life is when I say things can't get no worse......God shakes his finger and proves me wrong soooo
make the most of what we have including time!
pictureme :-)

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2004-05-01 11:29 AM


Such an excellent write.  Enjoyed.
JL


She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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