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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2003-11-06 10:30 AM


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I’d been missing each morning for days
Nestled in among great paths of corn
Judging carefully by my padding, while
Greasing hinges of winter gardens…
Preparing last night for any number of useful things
In the end, all was as deep as it would go…far beyond my recognition
Or at least to my way of thinking, as deep as I would allow

Every day walking out and seeing
Precious barrels of discouragement, for what they
Would soon pick clean...
Deciding, this fabric could be put to better use
Now frizzing at brim's edge, while crows set up chairs in trees
Waiting for the crust of old snow to leave

Standing in fields of cold rain & snow, I came upon an unusual corner, one sketching details of aster blooms.
I walked leisurely, gathering flowers, or whatever four leaf clovers I could consume…among clusters of sumac fruit
In such a spirit, wondering how the most intricate of beauty would, rise above some need for proximity, to something so dreamy

I walked toward this generosity, reached in my pocket and took out a letter, creased, neatly folded, and a little wet.
There sung this voice, meeting me face to face…a little dried and puckered, yet not nearly strained…touching me in a way, both intimate and deep, this fine walking image peaked

I read it again, and all the signs came around, marking the place I had been….mounding up all the dirt upon which green grass germinated
Berries and colors of all shades grew, gathering what little dew From moist air drank just enough to glow

We sat back together, on the crown of envisioned might
Arguing a little, while smiling, with the mirror looking on overhead
This letter and I keeping erratic time, while some invisible clock promenaded
With a slit second timing coo coo clock
Then an utterly vague announcement would seemingly returned
Without any mention of recent events or uneven weather
Bearing resemblance in great form and spirit tender

There is something entirely decided before we greet
Morning’s shining jewels or slippery black defeat
I felt a little cavalier, considering, simmering sentiments
Where this letter would await, tossing damp numbers of things
Through the air, to the wick which tries to read
In degrees of commonness, and the great smoking pipe of
Our universe...dreamlike...hidden, yet flowing through mid-air
With a twenty-dollar gold piece nestled in our short hair

Various pockets of warmth kindle like a fire
In the process we would drink an earthly glass of sapphire
Then exactly fifteen minutes later, fill our yawning minds
With whatever brown furnishings we can and will eventually find.

The mirror laughed...the letter and I chimed along
How silly we thought, to argue, now skipping elbow to elbow
Striding intimacy lives in the least likely places
Wearing total wonderment, any one of us could umbrella
Seemingly to know what words to say
Inviting possibly within each wakeful day
Allowing that comment to stand in place with truth
Heartbreakingly beautiful, down to every last haunting detail
Overflowing with grace of notes, a wealth of finery wholesaled

© Copyright 2003 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-11-06 01:34 PM


Perfection, to the core.
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
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2 posted 2004-05-01 10:15 AM


Amazing write Lee J.   Your creativity is showing.

"My heart overflows with a beautiful thought! I will recite a lovely poem to the king, for my tongue is like the pen of a skillful poet."

Creativity is the overflow of a full mind and heart.

~Psalm 45:1


She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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