Passions in Prose |
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Return To Sender (Part Thirteen) |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
Almost choking on her tongue, Mary Lou was very startled by Bill’s voice. Not expecting to hear much from her sleeping lover other than the soft inhalation and exhalation of Bill’s breath. She whisked the blanket off of her feet and moved hurriedly to Bill’s side. Her eyes misty, she gently wiped a tear from them. Bill smiled the most pitiful but heartfelt smile that he could muster. His lips parched, in need of water, a dry tongue struggling to form the simple word “water”. She saw his struggles, a slight giggle escaping her lips. Reaching toward the bedside stand, pouring Bill a small amount of water...this would certainly quench his thirst and perhaps loosen up his vocal cords that he might be able to speak, even if only briefly. Struggling to speak, tears welling in his own eyes, Bill reached out his shaking hand toward Mary Lou. Taking his hand, holding softly, the warmth of him flowing through her fingers, she repeatedly stroked his palm with her thumb. This gesture of kindness, so simply done, drew them closer together. Mary Lou told Bill of their escape from the vehicle, of the prompt and professional care given by the EMT before Bill was taken away within the ambulance. She mentioned to him his brief smile as he lay there on the stretcher, just prior to the door quietly closing, obscuring his view of her. She did not want Bill to see her prior to leaving the accident scene, vanity and a woman’s sacred looks were far more important to her than ever to him... She told Bill what she knew from the Doctor, extremely good news considering the devastation that had taken place....Bill would not want to see the remains of what was a perfectly good Sport Utility....Now a total wreck....but that was not an issue to worry over. Mary Lou had already contacted her insurance agent and the details were being worked out. She had been given a week’s rental of another vehicle....and this would suffice until things were back in order at Bill’s home....a home becoming more each day one which would be shared by two, not one....Could he stand the efforts of a woman within his small but pleasurable sanctuary? Time would tell, yes, time would tell. Bill asked her if she had notified the children as of yet. Mary Lou stated that she had and that her son would be arriving tomorrow to help with things until Bill was able to take care of his own affairs... The State Police officer, Sargent Lucas, had stopped by during the morning, wanting to see if they were okay. He informed Mary Lou that no citation would be issued, being that the accident more than likely could not have been avoided. Bill was a cautious driver and this act of God certainly could not have been adequately foreseen to have prevented it from happening.... They continued talking of light and easy things for a few minutes until Mary Lou noticed the tiredness that she saw with Bill’s eyes. Noticing this, she took the reins and informed Bill that he should get some rest now. That she would be there at his side through the evening.....Bill, rather modest, objected to this pampering and attention that he was getting. However, he soon was reaffirmed in the opinion that a woman will get her way, at all cost. Knowing this, he accepted her suggestion, though continuing to feign resistance toward it. He knew his rest was very important....Lying there, his lids very heavy, Bill lulled into a light sleep, as a dream returned to him...one that had come to him on several occasions....He would remember this dream, for within it were many revelations which might or might not become a part of his, of their reality....Time, would the bearer be of this.... He fought to remember this dream.....one he must discuss... |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ YOU ARE AMAZING ~ I love the all of it~ Thank you so very much for the time you've spent on this beautiful story~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gotta agree with Marge here I would love to see this in hardback |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Making notes, checking 'em twice... Yep...we're going to discuss a few things, soon! |
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