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Brigid WillowKeeper
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since 2003-08-24
Posts 88
OHIO IN USA

0 posted 2003-12-15 12:53 PM



     I was walking down the halls, to my third period Geometry class, I was singing out loud. I can't remember the song, it was some showtune. I didn't care, or barely even notice, the stares I got from people as I am strolling down the senior hallway belting it out. Then, you walk past. I, immediatly stop singing and chills run down my spine. I hadn't realized that I had stopped walking, because someone ran into my inambulent personage. You then start picking up my books for me. You tell me not to worry about it, that some people are real jerks. I am still frozen. Your flowing brown hair falls in front of your face. It is the perfect length, and silky. Do you realize how much I long to reach out and touch it? To run my fingers through it? You hand me my books, I thank you, and without a word, you vanish.


     Headed towards my chior class, you walk past me. For once, I didn't notice. Just then, I hear my name called. "Hey, Kelly, how's it going?" I recognized you, my love, standing next to me, waving. For a split second, the world stops, and everyone, and everything vanishes. The only ones, breaking the void, are you and me. I smile back, trying to look, well, as normal as possible, and return the greeting. "Fine, thanks. How about you?" You say fine, and without another word, you're gone. Do you realize how much I just want to drop the things I am doing, and follow you to your physics class? Do you?


*uhh, break. More to come*

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wintertao
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL
1 posted 2003-12-24 07:49 PM


very nice
Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08
Posts 956

2 posted 2003-12-28 02:08 PM


Brings back memories...
I thought it was well written.

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