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Magnus
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0 posted 2003-12-07 12:05 PM


That last mile, so many thoughts whirling through his mind.  The male within, after many years
away from a woman’s touch, her softness, the scintillating fragrance...stirring feelings that had
lain dormant for quite some time.    Distracting Bill to the point of nearly sideswiping a curbside
rose bush....Yellow  roses....he knew she would be pleased by these....He could never forget her
favorite flower, nor her favorite color, favorite stone....her favorite cookie...How he remembered
sharing a single cookie....like two puppies after one bone, though much more tender in their
wrestling and feigned anger.  How delicate that touching of lips came upon the last crumb.
Wiping the chocolate from her lips ever lightly....then ravenously devouring the last taste of
chocolate....Perhaps....

They pulled up to the house, a portico covering the drive, no need to park  within a garage on
this clear night.  The gentle glow of a yellow light illuminating the grounds surrounding.  Rows
of Cedar dotted the landscape.....most having been finely manicured into various shapes....
Edward Scissor hands would have been quite proud.  Bill could not take credit for these
escapades of grooming.....His thumb rarely turned green, except from a mixture of quill’s
ink.

The gentleman, a characteristic of his, born of chivalrous thoughts....forcing him to open
the door for “M’lady” as he so aptly called her.....This, of course, brought a giggle from
her, causing the gleam of her eyes to sparkle even more brightly....Bill could never forget
her eyes....never.  

Modest, slightly embarrassed....he  allowed Mary Lou into his humble home.  One which
had not shared the company of another woman over the years.   Lacking something of a
feminine touch.....Glancing at Mary Lou, it was obvious that she was noticing this as well,
as she ran a fingertip over a coffee table’s edge....checking the smooth grain of finely
polished oak....Certainly, not now would she be conducting a more detailed inspection of
the internal confines of a poet and writers home.....Historically known to be somewhat
disorganized in their ways of collecting things, organizing...

The kitchen, spacious with a center bar area was very well designed.....Cooking was a
hobby to Bill.   He so enjoyed preparing a good meal for the occasional visitor that
darkened his door....Often treating the hired help to a sumptuous meal at the end of a
hard days work....

A foyer leading to a modest living area, hardwood floors with nicely designed oval rugs.
A cozy fireplace tucked into a corner of one end of the room....as a large screen TV
occupied much of the space of yet another corner.  At the far end, a credenza,   computer
desk and a rather large book shelf containing reference materials and works of many of
the masters.....Bill owned hardback copies of each and every Poe novel  written, as
well as many of Shakespeare’s works.  Keats, Yeats, several anthologies also rested within
the coloring of such a wealth of literature....  Beside the computer, a 1930ish manual
typewriter....still used to this day....particularly on those days when his muse felt lazy
and the nostalgia helped fuel the fires of an imagination which was worth it’s weight
in jewels....


Adding a few small logs to the embers, hot and still glowing from an earlier fire which
danced the walls in mystical shadows....a lover’s dance.   Using a small bellows to
gently fan the coals, glowing white within the gasp of air.   Soon....very soon,   the walls
would again dance the dance of two lovers.....Perhaps a short waltz....a delicate walk
down a lane of memories....memories remembered well, becoming more vivid within
an active mind....as the imagination grew with each pop of a crackling fire....

The shrill cry of a kettle calling Bill back to reality.....Darn, but the thoughts of Mary Lou
certainly brought forth the imaginative juices.....or were they?   A dash of tea, laced with
lemon and cream.....lightly sugared to taste,   though he knew she would much prefer a
more lightly concocted recipe of a delicate liquid....sipping good!  Perhaps a few wedges
of cheese, a light  wine?     Moving too fast, are we?  Shrugging his shoulders, Bill opted
for the cautious route....Time moved at a slow pace for 20 odd years.....should not the same
occur betwixt these two?

The fire crackled merrily before her eyes.  The efforts of the day draining from her limbs
as she sat upon a soft rug, watching the embers dance and float upward into the chimney’s
recesses.    Bill handed her the tea, steam still swirling above the cup.....Her lips pursing
slightly as she cooled the drink prior to a delicate, inaudible sip....Mesmerized by this,
Bill sat and watched, he had never felt so content, relaxed.....yet, at the same time, so
anxious....anxious for what...He moved onto the floor beside her.   Her next move
surprising him....


[This message has been edited by Magnus (12-07-2003 03:03 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-12-07 12:45 PM


oh my...(gulp)

Barry, the edge of my seat is worn...this is a good thing!

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2003-12-07 12:49 PM


I'll bet it did...

More...more...more.
TD

Martie
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3 posted 2003-12-07 03:37 PM


"Her next move
surprising him...."  Alrighty....then what, very Barry?

Bonnie j
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4 posted 2003-12-08 01:14 PM


Come on Barry don't leave us hanging......
What happens?
See Ya Bon

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-12-10 12:34 PM


me wait

you write


Sunshine
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6 posted 2003-12-12 02:33 PM



Working on 8, yes?  Good show!  Show well!

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2004-01-04 12:29 PM


I smile at the completeness of your thoughts~
BEAUTIFUL~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

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