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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 248
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"hate is such an ugly word" ha. thats only said by people who dont understand it. Hatred is a touchy subject, but for some, its a way of life. nothing could be better to them than the pleasure and pain of hating someone. because to be able to hate someone, means that this certain person, the one the hatred is directed at, came close enough to mean something, close enough, maybe, to even be loved. Toni knew that it woodnt have worked. even ms mcclain wasnt that stupid. Cutting class works for some people, but for toni, well, luck was always bad. n it wasnt that she didnt like english. it was jus that she Hated him...with good reason ***********MORE TO COME |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I enjoyed the story and like to see where your thoughts lead us. I hope you will continue with this piece. As far as critique goes the only suggestion I would offer is to check spellings and capitalizations. Thanks for sharing.  |
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