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SCREAMIN Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 51US, Tx |
The room was crowded, and I searched each face, thought I knew not what I was looking for; and my gaze fell upon one certain soul. His eyes were blue. No, they were bluer than blue. Like the deepest of ocean blues. I had never seen such eyes on a man. They captivated me. They blew me away, and left me motionless. His glare was strong, and I felt powerless to it. His eyes seemed to be the most vulnerable part of his body, yet the strongest. I felt like they were controlling me, taking over my senses; Anticipating my every move, my every thought, feeling my emotions, hearing what I hear, seeing the world as I see it. I was completely captured by his overpowering eyes. Locked inside them, comsumed by lust. I felt connected to him in a way I never imagined possible. I didn't even know him, but I know those eyes. I know them well. I felt like I had been lost forever, and when it was an impossible feat, his eyes found me! I wanted to never look away. To be trapped in his eyes forever. They completed my soul, they put me together when I was broken. I felt whole in his gaze. For the first time in my life, I was truly happy. I was at peace within myself. His eyes brought a smile to my face, britghened my life, and put joy in my heart. They brought me to a standstill, and I fell in love with them. For that sheer moment, I was in ecstacy, pure bliss. Then he looked away... and I swore I'd never find happiness again. .::in memory of the love I'd never know::. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is really cool, I can't believe it got no responses.....well perhaps giving it another spell at the top will invoke reponse..... I hope you post more soon, cos I love this one!! Luv, Liz xxx "Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~ |
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laurie Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 153canada, ontario |
yeah... l agree. it's captivating... keep writing... this definitely should have another spell at the top... (that's not the reason l'm commenting...) it's so fast paced... wow. laurie. |
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SCREAMIN Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 51US, Tx |
Sorry about the spelling, it's one of those words. Thank you both for the compliments. I dont write much prose, but it's good to know that someone likes what I DO write. I have written another peice actually. I posted it a while back, but it didn't getting any responses. Anyway, thanks again. |
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