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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2003-05-04 06:16 PM

She sits so quietly, silent thoughts filling the air with the soft scent of love everlasting, still lingering there in spite of knowing it somehow died under a midnight moon that was so much colder than anyone had ever felt in June. Restless thoughts and memories surround her temples, tempting her to love again, although she knows there will never again be a love such as this.
For how could anyone be this lucky more than once?
He was the sun, moon, and stars all rolled into one. A lover whose heart made two melt into one. And oh, how easily he did bring forth the fullness of bloom to her cheeks, the glow of love in her eyes, the heat and the passion, blush could not disguise. Then he walked away one night, nevermore to return. Her face turned ashen when she received the news of his untimely death (is it ever timely?).
It shattered her soul into fragments and pieces too small for anyone to believe the whole of the heart could ever mend. And yet, she sits here quietly under the fullness of another June moon, dreaming of Love.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (05-04-2003 06:39 PM).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2003-05-04 09:58 PM

OH YES...this MUST be continued.....
How lovely is the imagery in this ethereal beauty. Hauntingly lovely Kacy...Im so pleased to see you trying your gifted pen at prose...

call me greedy..but the moth wants more

pleeeeeeezzzze

You're the best I've ever felt ...
it's so wrong not to be with you.
It's getting harder to stay away,
it stops my heart just to be with you.

SH

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-05-04 10:16 PM

Thank you, JM, for the enthusiastic reply. You offer me much encouragement!
This is a story I've been working on in my mind for a few days, and have yet to figure out where it shall go. But it's pretty obvious another love affair is on the horizon.
Well, I have to start work soon, but will be working on this again in the next few days.

glad you are back

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

3 posted 2003-05-05 02:33 AM

Hi Midnitesun, I'll have to admit I'm not much of a reader (of non-fiction), strange huh? But I wanted to return your kindness and check out your work posted here.

And hey, it was very good. I'm going to go read part two now...

You take care, and I'll check with you soon...

Richy

Zaynab
Member

since 2003-05-04

Posts 59
Kuwait

4 posted 2003-05-05 09:53 AM

Lovely, can't wait to read the second part!

Zaynab
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Kill me tonight and I will love again
Leave me to live and I live in pain
Leave me no love and I live in vain
Kill me tonight and kill the pain

J. K. Mitchell
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

5 posted 2003-05-05 07:56 PM

You bring me to tears.

"Cuidado con mi corazon."--R. Martin

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2003-05-05 09:00 PM

almost sounds like my life....

M

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