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Chameleon
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since 2002-08-07
Posts 99
Australia

0 posted 2002-11-21 01:44 AM


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Ana
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I really don't care what she thinks- she's pretty.
She is beautiful, I am aware she's uniquely different, her taste is an acquire though familiar taste.
She is a dark protective angel.
One who makes me nervous and frail.

When the tidal wave hit we were subdued underwater together and she let me breathe for her. Surfacing, finding a way out of the ice cold abyss I licked her salty lips and grabed her by the hips, locking into her transient brown cat-like eyes.

Swimming back to shore she kicked while I stroked some more.
the rush of waves sent us to sand. To make sure, i was on solid sand i rolled her on her back and noticed beside her lips a leaning flower had blossomed within the salt... a lithiuma.

© Copyright 2002 Nicholas Hall - All Rights Reserved
majnu
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since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088
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1 posted 2002-11-21 10:56 AM


this is a poem.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Kielo
Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109

2 posted 2002-11-21 01:17 PM


This is beautiful. Very descriptive.
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