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AceoConas Junior Member
since 2002-04-20
Posts 27AK, anchorage |
If people like this, I'll write more parts **************************************************** "No!!!"Aceo* yelled as his father fell to the floor."Father!!" "Aceo...I want you to remember..."Aceo knelt by his father's side, cradling his head in his lap, softly moving the hair out of his eyes. "Remember...Rias...Your mother's name..." "No!Don't leave me!" "Take care of...Sora...Venuel...and Viridia..." "Please!" "Aceo...promise me...Take care of them..." With that, 18 years of memories was laid to rest in the form of Aceo's father. Years later the memory continued to haunt him. "Rias..." "Aceo?" Sora, who stood next to him, watched as he drifted further and further away from herself,Venuel,Viridia, and Conas**. Conas, the almost mute young boy with the mysterious green eyes. Whenever Aceo looked at him he cringed, seeming to see his father every time he looked at him Conas, who held the key to all of Aceo's questions... **************************************************** *Aceo is my first and favorite character, from a never finished book which this is the sequel to. **His father had another son, Conas, Who has a pendant shaped like a key. **************************************************** Tell me if you like it!!  Aceo |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
John, I like this a lot, you could combine 1 and 2 into one it's not too long and you've got me wondering what will happen. Good work Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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AceoConas Junior Member
since 2002-04-20
Posts 27AK, anchorage |
Okay. I'll post that with part 2. I hope you like it!  Aceo |
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