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merlynh Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 411deer park, wa |
Sizzle Bang She don't have the same one until she learns to draw. Keeping up with dirty Lilly and Lady Ma. It'll all come around for some, unless you die from living at all. She's a tuff lady and that ain't all, five births and one didn't fall. She's a cook ruffian, work her ass off without breaking a sweat, a good-hearted woman in love with her man. Picks-um up when he falls after getting up off the floor herself and never thinks twice. You see she's been Dirty Lilly and Lady Ma, been though more times then, right. Her man don't care he's been through the roughest of God's green earth, wouldn't have any other way, at all. Shake a rump, jump, a bump. I've said it all. 2002 Merlyn Hearn Email. Merlyn007@email.com |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
cool, there is some sort of rhythm here. and jump, bump, rump thus all and fall ending make it sound great! ~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again. |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
hey, i dig yer style, awesome description, is there more to this character? i wanna know more anyways, yer description left me wondering, that's good, you got me hooked, and i really dig the style involved, the rhythm. "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin |
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merlynh Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 411deer park, wa |
I enjoyed writing this sort of stuff. I am glad someone understands some of my free writing. |
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