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Celebi
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since 2001-04-20
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0 posted 2001-04-21 03:21 PM



Like a painting full of detail and color, When I see a butterfly I feel like I've just walked into the most beautiful painting in all the world.

I  watch them for hours gracefully flying from flower to flower, Making the flower even more beautiful than it was before.

The beautiful butterflys, even though they dont know it bring back wonderful and beautiful memories of when i was five or six years old. They remind of when i used to swing. I swung so hight that I felt like could have touched the heavens. I felt like I was a butterfly flying to the clouds to seek an angel.

I love butterflys and I hope that they are on earth forever so everyone and everything can always enjoy them.

                  ~Celebi~


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-04-21 03:45 PM


Celebi, this is, indeed, very lovely, but is more in the form of Prose than poetry.  I'm going to close this here, but move it over to the Prose Forum, where folks may be more inclined to respond.

Thank you!

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