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0 posted 2004-06-21 05:22 PM

hey folks!

since my native language is not english (i'm german if that is of any interest) i have a problem with an expression in the english sonnet i'm working on. more precisely that means i have problems with the term "brown eyes". i want to write it in a more disguised way (i especially want to avoid the term "eyes")but somehow it just doesn't wanna come to me. maybe some of you can help? thanks a lot!

greetings - christian

Titia Geertman
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1 posted 2004-06-21 06:12 PM

Hi, English is not my native language too, I'm Dutch, but here's a link that is of much help for me http://www.rhymezone.com/

You can choose on synonyms too and many other stuff. I mainly use it to find rhyming words.

Titia

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2 posted 2004-06-21 07:14 PM

How about 'pools of darkened honey'

Titia Geertman
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3 posted 2004-06-23 05:47 PM

OH WOW!

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4 posted 2004-06-23 06:58 PM

Brown-kindled browcandles

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5 posted 2004-06-29 03:19 PM

"honey-colored windows to the soul"

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6 posted 2004-07-07 11:05 AM

autumn's brunette hair?

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