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0 posted 2004-04-16 08:15 PM


Please help me!!!

One of my close friend's birthday is coming up real soon and for her b-day I want to give her a birthday poem.  I know I'm a poet and all, but I can't seem to write one.  Does anyone know a good birthday poem? I'm only 13, so it can't be anything too adult and she isn't my BEST friend, just pretty close.

Any help would be greatly appreciated. Thank you!!

~Alli~

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1 posted 2004-04-17 12:37 PM


ok I saw this and just wrote this quick....I hope you like it and feel free to use it....


Happy Birthday
today is for you
a day for making wishes
and hoping they come true

It’s just for celebrating
and dancing happily along
as we sing in your honor
the 'Happy Birthday' song!

I hope you get everything that you wanted
I hope your Birthday wish comes true
and know that on this day I celebrate
the gift of knowing you!


~SEA~

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2 posted 2004-04-17 02:40 PM


Wow!!! Thank you soooo much!! I loved it and I'm going to give it to her!

Thanks again!

~Alli~

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3 posted 2004-04-17 02:41 PM


oh, and don't worry, I'm not gonna like tell her I wrote it or anything. I'll give you full credit.

~Alli~

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4 posted 2004-04-17 06:43 PM


aww cool, I am glad you liked it! It's ok if you give me credit or not, I did it for you
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5 posted 2004-04-17 06:59 PM


Thanks so much again! Her birthday is next friday so after I give it to her I'll write and tell you if she liked it or not.

~Alli~

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6 posted 2004-04-17 09:46 PM


LOL I hope so sweetie...
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7 posted 2004-04-21 08:26 PM


Sea, I hope that you read this before Friday!!!!  I wanna tell her that you wrote it for me to give to her but I don't know your name! If you don't wanna tell me for whatever reason, that's okay, but I was just wondering.

Thanks again!

~Alli~

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8 posted 2004-04-21 09:47 PM


hey hon, it's on the bottom of every poem on here...lol (that I have written)
it's, Susan Elaine Allen   (SEA)

and that is sweet of you, thank you

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9 posted 2004-04-24 02:30 PM


Her birthday was yesterday and I gave her a present, a card, and the poem. And guess what........she loved it!!!
I told her that you wrote it for me to give to her and she says thank you sooo much! She absolutely loved it! Thank you so much again.

~Alli~  

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10 posted 2004-04-25 08:35 PM


right on, I am glad she liked it. I hope she had a happy day....
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