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|Macbeth thesis statement|
since 2003-09-27Posts 85
ok i am having a problem with my thesis statement i wrote and i dont like it and i was wondering if you could help me with it and make it better
here is the quote i have to write a paper about
"Lady Macbeth is the most complex and compelling character in Macbeth. I might consider her to be the single most important factor on which the entire play pivots. I do not see how there would be a play without her."
-explain in detail how you agree with this particular interpretation of the play
here is my thesis paragraph. (the thesis has to go at the end of the sentence not front like i like it.)
Lady Macbeth has been a major influence on many things in this play. She pretty much has caused every even in this play to happen. After reading the note sent by Macbeth Shakesphere shows Ladt Macbeth as more of a man than a woman. By influencing Macbeth to kill Duncan and act like a man she got turned Macbeth into a Killer and herself as a Coward and on a road to insanity and death.
i think its missing something but i cant think of it once i get past the theseis statement things flow nicely but i have a problem with the thesis statements
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