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Joy of Kitchen |
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Kevin Taylor Member
since 1999-12-23
Posts 185near Vancouver, BC, Canada 
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. Spoons c-d-lick-k-k pots/pans b-bang-ng-ng bowng b boawng Hey! -ey! lids CRSH-INGGG Hey ng ng-ng b-ba-wnng Hey! Hey! HeyboangHecd-ba-b-yonnHey! HeyowngHeyboangdeclick (SHiNGHey!) Heyang-b-bang-c-dlick bongHey! c-Hey-c-baowngSHINGGbonng-nging-Hey! Kevin "Poetry is, at once, what you get... and how you got there." |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Kevin, Not sure I follow where you might be taking this, but it surely does look and sound like a busy kitchen. If that was your goal, you have succeeded, my friend. And, it has the added benefit of being in no way archaic  Hey, look! I got to be first this time. < !signature--> Pete What terms shall I find sufficiently simple in their sublimity -- sufficiently sublime in their simplicity -- for the mere enunciation of my theme? Edgar Allan Poe [This message has been edited by Not A Poet (edited 01-26-2000).] |
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DesertJana Junior Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 19USA |
Sounds like the pre-dinner symphony at my house! Excellent work poet...I can hear the crash of symbols filling the void of conversation. |
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Kevin Taylor Member
since 1999-12-23
Posts 185near Vancouver, BC, Canada |
Hi You can't just "read" this one. You have to actually make the sounds. And if you do, you'll end up singing. There's a reason to the madness. CRSH-INNNG! Kevin "Poetry is, at once, what you get... and how you got there." |
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patchoulipumpkin Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 196Bermuda |
very cool.. |
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merely_a_jester Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 67Arkansas... that's all you get |
first off i think that this is very inventive, though i'm still not sure of what to make of it. i do want to thank you for the expression my roommate gave me when i tried to read it out loud, it was well worth the read merely_a_jester Are scarecrows just like men, and do you hold That a false coin is just as good as gold? Moliere, "Tartuffe" |
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jbouder Member Elite
since 1999-09-18
Posts 2534Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash |
Kevin: This was fun.  Not as fun as "i, I ain't" but, hey, they all can't be that good. Later.Jim |
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Earthtones Junior Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 10 |
Fantastic!!!!!!!! |
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warmhrt Senior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563 |
This ... gave me the kind of shivers you get when you hear nails scrape across a chalkboard. I almost covered my ears. Nice work, warmhrt [This message has been edited by warmhrt (edited 01-27-2000).] |
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