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Miss Abagail Mannering Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 136byron, il |
I can feel the cool breeze around me. I can hear the plane in the air. As the cars go by, I see debris fly and I know that they just do not care. *chorus* I don't want the world to know me, 'cause I don't think that they'd even see.. that my spirit wasn't always broken and I'd give anything to be free. Yes, I'd give anything to be free. *********** So I sit around watchin' T.V. 'cause I'm not sure just where to begin. And I'll chug down some rye in the blink of an eye, then I'll pour me a glass full of gin. *chorus* Now, I don't want your handful of pity, and I don't want your damn outstrecthed hand. 'Cause I know you don't care and life isn't fair. And I don't wanna meet your demands. *chorus* (this song was written 8/31/99. it was inspired by a friend of mine, for his band. His 2 favorite alcohlic drinks are gin and rye.. see if you can name that tune..i had it stuck in my head when I wrote the song.) "Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me |
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Miss Abagail Mannering Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 136byron, il |
i'm sorry about not being able to read it..scroll over it with your mouse, then u can read it. "Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me |
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Hawk183 Member
since 1999-12-24
Posts 130 |
Abigail, Thesong that I was thinking of when I got to the "rye" line was "Bye,Bye,Miss American Pie"(not sure if that's the actual title  )I can't get out of my head now!  I like this Abigail...I think the lyrics are exellent.Thanks... Hawk p.s.-The green must go |
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John Foulstone Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 100Australia |
Hawk, I don't hear it as Don McLean's "American Pie". Abagail, sounds more to me like Goo Goo Dolls "Iris". "And I don't want the world to see me 'Cause I don't think that they'd understand When everthing's made to be broken I just want you to know who I am" Reckon it'd make a good song nonetheless. (Oops - is that archaic?) It's never too late to have a happy childhood ... |
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DesertJana Junior Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 19USA |
I can't begin to name the tune but this is an excellent song...It has a rhythm all it own! Love It! |
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Miss Abagail Mannering Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 136byron, il |
ding ding ding...we have a winner!!! Congrats to John Foulstone for guessin' the correct song.. i'm sorry about the green, i tried to go back in and change the color...but it wouldn't do it...thank you for your comments enjoy! "Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me |
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Hawk183 Member
since 1999-12-24
Posts 130 |
OK..ok...it was a shot in the dark... "Good ole boys drinkin whiskey and rye..." I guess I was thinking a little too generaly. I can see the comparison to "Iris" now...any consellation prize for playing? Hawk |
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Miss Abagail Mannering Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 136byron, il |
of course...how about a big smile? "Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me |
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