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Wordshaman
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 110
Illinois, USA
0 posted 2000-01-21 05:19 PM

Clamor for attention,
Sprout little abbreviated personalities.
Smile at them, and they blossom out
From introverted shells
To show you a glimpse of self.

Blossom out from imitated personalities
To show an instant of original self.
© Copyright 2000 Greg Butler - All Rights Reserved
poetry_kills
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since 1999-12-04
Posts 549
new orleans
1 posted 2000-01-22 12:19 PM

very clever    i remember being a first grader... always wanting to impress... always making excuses for not knowing everything there is to know *Waa haa haa haa* i guess i haven't changed much! *Grins*

sincerely,
jerome the boy with no brain

 A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge
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