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Wordshaman
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 110
Illinois, USA

0 posted 2000-01-19 03:03 AM


People who can subsist entirely
On past victories and memories scare me.
You never know if they’re talking to you
Or if you’re the familiar echo
Of someone they once knew.


© Copyright 2000 Greg Butler - All Rights Reserved
haze
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since 1999-11-03
Posts 528
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1 posted 2000-01-19 05:23 AM


excellent! just excellent. You leave nothing to hone, nothing out of place.

KUDOS to you, Strong KUDOS!

TA
~haze

jbouder
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since 1999-09-18
Posts 2534
Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash
2 posted 2000-01-19 11:50 AM


WS:

I can almost hear Dennis Miller repeating this one on his rant on HBO.  Well wrought statement.  Perhaps this could be an introduction to another poem ...

 Jim

"If I rest, I rust." - Martin Luther


Wordshaman
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since 2000-01-17
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3 posted 2000-01-19 04:29 PM


JB--the Dennis Miller reference is the best one I've gotten so far.  Thanks.  

Wordshaman

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