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jenn991013 New Member
since 1999-12-30
Posts 5 |
there were shadows cast among the thorny roses tears fell from angels as they cried for you the sky a caustic shade of blue the sun dangerously hot and bright people smile but not joyful smiles more like evil sadistic grins as you pass the water which once quenched your thirst now only stings your throat as you drink the once soft grass you loved to walk on feels like sharp jagged glass inching into your feet haha she laughs can you feel her pain? |
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John Foulstone Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 100Australia |
Yes, I can, jenn. Welcome. It's never too late to have a happy childhood ... |
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Kirk T Walker Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 357Liberty, MO |
Have you ever walked barefoot across a lawn (even the softest lawn)when you've had an open wound on your foot? Well, anyway I like the image of grass of jagged glass, it sort of reminds me of that sensation. |
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