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Critical Analysis #1

Deep down inside

Quiet Lightning
Member

since 1999-12-26

Posts 56

0 posted 2000-01-10 08:47 PM

Deep down inside

So unique,so mysterious,how can I pass you by
so dark,so intense,I had to give it a try
You had to be like the Elephant man
I found something special inside
another wonder of the world welcome to paradise

Thunder,then lightning,you caught me by surprise
I heard the anger in your voice
and saw the devil in your eyes

I cried blood and spit fire
heard the streaks from the tire
Nightmares of drowning with noone around
I could hear no vibration not a single sound

I felt the virus in my system
as I tried to let you know
you were once my true love
but now I'm gonna have to let you go

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-01-01 04:40 PM

QuietLightning~
Sorry to see that almost a year passed without anyone in here responding to your post.

Your anguish was evident and I sincerely hope things are better for you.
Hope 2001 brings you much happiness.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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