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Critical Analysis #1

Sight and sound

mister61
Junior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 41
bergen county, nj

0 posted 1999-12-21 01:53 PM

She's music to my eyes
In ways that somehow still surprise
A sight that fills my ears
With songs to last through all my years

She is true love defined
The joy and pain that fill my mind
The swell that fuels my heart
My missing peace before the start

She's always been just you
There's no one old and no one new
Just you to share my life
And only you to be my wife

Fairy Colours
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 169
Sunrise,Fl,US

1 posted 1999-12-21 03:09 PM

How I wish that could be me. Fantastic.

--A Little Fairy--

warmhrt
Senior Member

since 1999-12-18

Posts 1563

2 posted 1999-12-21 11:56 PM

A sweet, romantic poem...it flowed well, and rhymed so nicely. I bet your wife will keep it forever!

warmhrt

jaxjoy
Member

since 1999-12-14

Posts 112
Texas

3 posted 1999-12-22 05:29 PM

sigh, amor. The splendor of love. Beautiful poem.

haze
Senior Member

since 1999-11-03

Posts 528
Bethlehem, PA USA

4 posted 1999-12-22 05:36 PM

pure romance...sigh again...nice work poet

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