Critical Analysis #1 |
Camera Flash |
leon Junior Member
since 1999-12-13
Posts 23 |
Camera Flash Blossoming flesh refreshes my eye-- a fresh girl who can be so sweet. How she inflames. Good photograph. Hot! In wearing out my camera, strap has turned loose around my neck. Settled down, she's pictured, posed; calmly baits for the shutter's release. What a view, with the lens: wide-angle. When I point I aim to shoot-- for that flick...the click! click! click! Now down and low. She holds. I snap her. 1999 - Leon J. W. |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
Leon ~smile~ Now this time Brad's comment on your other post definitely applies ... I can maybe see at least a couple of "meanings" and plenty of subtle innuendo. It has the same fresh fun "innocent" (heh) feel as before, and again cheered my evening which I tell you has been pretty horrible till now. Oh yes ... did you mean "baits" or "waits" ?.. baits would work I suppose if you maybe see her as "bait" for the camera, or the speaker/photographer or something ... so many meanings Brad ... so little time . Philip |
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leon Junior Member
since 1999-12-13
Posts 23 |
Thanks poertree for your comments. The word choice of "baits" is deliberate, as in she teases. Now about the innuendo, hmmm, I don't know about that. When photography was my passion, I use to shoot flora down and low, like on my stomach to truly capture the right perspective. Of course, I only mentioned that just in case anyone was wondering. Thanks again, Leon |
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