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Critical Analysis #1
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idream2dream
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since 1999-11-30
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bessemer
0 posted 1999-12-09 04:50 PM

You brush my hair from my eyes
Gently kissing my forehead
I feel my pulse begin to rise
Don't leave, I looked at you and said.

Saying as I grabbed your hand
Lost in each other's gaze
Our bodies fell to the sand
The sparkle now turned into a burning blaze

Touching,exploring  your every part
As you caresse, teach and show
How to give, express, open feeling in my heart
To release my wants , dreams to let the grow.


 
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