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Critical Analysis #1
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armanca
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 211
Tennessee
0 posted 1999-12-03 04:24 PM

GingerBreadMan

Like licorice rain
... a mind game
Torrid thoughts abused
... candyland approves
Melt in your hand...
but i'm in your head
And holding me down
only causes your sanity to sink
... in my sweet syrup.


Carman
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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-12-04 05:41 PM

Over here too! We can't multiple post in different forums Armanca, so I shall close off these ones. If people want to leave a comment on one of these they can do so in the dark forums.

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)
armanca
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 211
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2 posted 1999-12-05 08:05 AM

I did not know this Isis. I'm merely trying to have people critique my work. I thought "critcal anaylsis" would be the best bet.
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