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Yoin Junior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 29 |
I have been trying to expand my range of writing and have decided to try some different Japanese styles. Your thoughts and views are desired.. Yoin haibun small steps taken, hearts touching, spring waters running-great mountains shedding winter's dreams. a freshness, a beginning, a thaw of winter the wind blows her hair in dark eyes and clever smile secrets just for me Yoin |
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roxane Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 505us |
i like this style, it's refreshing to see a short poem that still leaves so much for the reader to think about. a new beginning, the secrets of a mysterious woman. it's unique. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
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