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Slow dance Jamaica |
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Lolita Junior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 44Buffalo, NY, America |
A slow, slurred rhumba beat knocks it's rythm against my feet And pebbles slide, and move away Away on a ride, lasts all day Jamaica moves my naked hips traces dreams with fingertips Just to make, me call her name Journey to take, my pleasure and pain It hurts when she parts soft, eager lips so good when she starts Inching herself, deep into me Inside she'll keep making me free Slow dancing she shows me just what I am Jamaica my woman Jamaica my man |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
WHEW..... and I thought I might be in the wrong forum with "Time Line" !! .... when I've calmed down I'll maybe think of something constructive to say  |
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