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jennysbeau1 Junior Member
since 1999-10-21
Posts 10Cornelius, Oregon, USA |
This is another poem to my fiance Jennifer with whom I share a love so deep.... Jennifer, You Are.... The light that guides me, The shinning star that shows me the way to happiness. The softness that comforts me, The sweet tender touch that never fails to engulf my senses. The treasure that enriches me, The pure honest love that makes me a better man. The words that motivate me, The wonderous innocence that shows me no limits. The rock that supports me, The incredible strength that carries me through darkmess. The truth that embraces me, The unique measurement that I long to live my life by. The idea that teaches me, The knowledge of real love that has filled my soul. Jennifer, You are... The love that amazes me, The one true love that I have always yearned for. ------------------ Remember...write what you love..and love what you write...Terry |
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roxane Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 505us |
this is great. i hope that you've shown it to her. maybe i'm not being totally fair however because i have a soft side for romantic poetry. |
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